For this story i tried to make a lot of suspens to buld tension to keep the readers interested. As it is targeted at a younger age group keeping them interested would come by creating the tension therefore this is why i tried to focus on this.I also used different words for lexis to try and scare the younger aduiences and try and create an imagine in there head to make them use there imagination through out this piece of flash fiction that we will eneter for the holloween compettiton.